Strolling on the meadow,
Searching for your shadow,
Darkness spreads to swallow,
Piercing pain that follow.
A darkened cloud spreads,
Hiding the lighted thread,
Shadows weep as they shred,
Without a ray, it’s their death.
Shadows die in darkness,
Leaving us in blindness,
Heartbeats fading to numbness,
A light, never to reach us.
Moments of lonely Despair,
Vanishes blindly to thin air,
Dreaded Distance disappears,
Dear, if your shadow appears.
A rising face, lighting the soul,
The lighted soul filling whole,
Lighting life for shadows to roll,
Shadows now, life’s only goal.
In that moment’s moment,
While our hearts were silent,
A gushing spark within, I felt
It’s your shadow...
with my heartbeats present.
A silent breeze melted me to her shadow,
Knotted soul, we are on the meadow,
Twining to unite, in blanketed moonlight,
Flooding delight in this lovely night…
32 comments:
So beautiful poem and images !
Cri
This was lovely! I love the images, too.
The angst of waiting
dissolving in the
gentle footsteps
of the beloved..
beautifully conveyed
"Dreaded Distance disappears,
Dear, if your shadow appears."
Loved these lines especially
Flooding delight in this lovely night..wonderful ya:)
Nice..
Happy Oonam.
the rhyming in this poem was so smooth, bravo xxx
A darkened cloud spreads,
Hiding the lighted thread,
Shadows weep as they shred,
Without a ray, it’s their death.
very good lines....keep it up Unni.
Excellent.
Very touching. This is second poem I read today ..both of them made me sad....
brilliant effort !! 'shadows weep as they shred' was so touching ..
beautiful poem.....mast lagi padh ke :)
RD, to tell you the truth, I do not understand poetry as I somehow feel many poets try n make this genre sound complicated just to be known as a good poet..but yours is the second blog where I can bring myself to read verses apart from Ugich Konitari's. and a piece like this keeps me coming back to your blog :)
It was definitely the shadow you were waiting for, Unni. The only thing that stays with us all the time is the spirit - the shadow is probably the way the spirit wanted to come alive to you. Great one, again, Unni.
Cool, man!
Just amazing Very well written
Dear Readers dais,
A shadow is the only one companion who never leaves us at any situation,the one who always sticks on to us at any cost.often people fail to find out that shadow within..nice that u are able to...!I suggest you watch kim's movie 3-iron...:)
wishes n prayers
joe
Unni, I spoke to Amazon customer care with your order number. They need your email id to track down the order details (wonder why, when we have the number and the address ! But that's Amazon !). I tried to dig in your blog page for your email. Let me have your email id and I'll follow up again for you. :)
Or email me - sandaes@gmail.com
nice poem
Wow, you leave me speechless with your words.
Excellent.
beautiful lines........ nice poem......
beautiful.
creepy piece,
lovely done!
I appreciate your lovely post, happy blogging!
...In that moment’s moment,
While our hearts were silent,
A gushing spark within, I felt
It’s your shadow...
with my heartbeats present...
I too witnessed..
Thats moments moments..
With All Best Wishes!!
Shadows die in darkness,
Leaving us in blindness ......
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two awards for you,
invite you to join us at jingle poetry….
Its cool... So beautiful poem.
Hi
Where are you !!!
I hope al is well .....
We miss you ;)
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