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Friday, May 07, 2010

Oh! Dear...Come Near........








As I see my sun setting,

Darkened soul of mine fretting,

Oh!My Mother dear, come as a moon,

Light my sky, with your glow, as my boon.



As I see the crowd disappear,

Lone I stand with deserted fear,

Oh!My Mother dear, come as a rain,

Flood my mind, with your love, drowning pain,



As I see my heart bleeding,

Breathless I stand all shivering,

Oh!My Mother dear, come as a breeze,

Wrap my heart, with care, letting my pain to freeze.



As I see my sigh unheard,

Lost I stand away from the herd,

Oh!My Mother dear, come as a song,

Tune my ears, to lullabies that I long.



As I see my tears rolling,

Blind I walk with fear of falling,

Oh!My Mother dear, come as a smile,

Wipe my tears, with warm kisses for a while.



As I see my dreams shatter,

Tired I lay with a mind so clutter,

Oh!My Mother dear, come as a shelter,

let me  nap,on your lap, feeling your soft stroking fingers



As I see my desert blooming,

Delighted I dance with a heart that’s booming,

Oh! My Mother dear, come as the rhythm,

Embraced... Lets sway, listening to our hearts rhythm.






As I see my life stream flowing,

Brave I swim, with a mind never failing,

For I know mother dear, that you are near,

So near..., everywhere….forever……..


86 comments:

anupama said...

Dear Unni,
Good Morning!
This is a beautiful and loving dedication to your Mother Dear On the auspicious occasion of Mother's Day!
Special heartfelt congrats from my beloved Amma to you!Ine her absence too,she makes us feel the powerful and soothing presence!Her ardent and incessant blessings will be with you!
So,be cheerfuland kep smiling!
Your Amma will be a lighted lamp before your deeds!So,live your life cheerfully doing your duties and remembering ever and anon the God Almighty and your beloved Mother!
The lines are soooo touchng and you made my eyes moist!
My Amma advises you to keep on writing and it is sure that you can rove yourself to be a well known poet!The true and honest blessings from my Amma!:)
Thanks for the wonderful post!The wait was worth!
Wishing you a lovely and cool day,
Sasneahm,
Anu

Rachna said...

Very nice!

Raveena Raveendran said...

Hello friend ,
Really wonderful poem and the pictures too.The mother's love is never ending and ever caring . The deep relation btw the mother and the child is well established through this poem...

Neha said...

what a tribute to your mother on this wonderful day..simply spell binding..you do have a way with words..loved each verse..I don't think I can express what I want to say in words!

Suhaina said...

Very interesting. Now I feel like seeing my mom and hug her tightly.

Joseph Pulikotil said...

Hi Unni:)

Greetings and good wishes:)

It is amazing we call upon our mothers for everything-in times of sorrow, suffering, affliction, distress,joy,happiness,success. Truly, mothers are archangels given to us by God to take care of us in this world.They are there for everything making great sacrifices which only mothers are capable of.

Your lovely poem with wonderful photos beautifully demonstrates this amazing unique role played by mothers.

Have a nice day Unni:)
Joseph

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

aww..this is the first time ive read your poem and it was...sooo awesome!! i like the message and the rhymes,,..the usage of words..everything@@@!!!! you are excellent!!! :D i totally love it! ^_^

യറഫാത്ത് said...

dear unni,
let me give you some tears from my eyes................
thanks,
Have a nice day...

rohini said...

the poem is just gr8/.//and the pics good too...the mother kissing the child is just awesome...felt the warmth of mother's arm....no peace anywhere else....

ManzoorAluvila said...

as i go through your poems ....i felt that you are a son every mother wish to have..and the love towards mother always sky limit or no limit..very nice poem..and all the very best ..

with love manzoor aluvila

Vibushan L Narayan said...

Hey :) Thanks for visiting my blog and do keep visiting! beautiful poetry and a wonderful picturization.. Compliments the content very well.. Good blog. You have a new follower :)

പട്ടേപ്പാടം റാംജി said...

For I know mother dear, that you are near,
So near..., everywhere….forever……..

Really wonderful poem and nice pictures too.

cristina said...

Beautiful pictures, very impressive !

Cri

Anya said...

Hi Unni
So so so so lovely written ....
straight from your heart :))
Your Mother would be very proud on you when she will visit your blog!!

My Mama
is in my heart FOREVER :)
:))

(and also Papa :))
LOL

Tara said...

A precious gift .. I can see how much this had touched ur mom.. Awesome !!

sm said...

very nice
loved the way you said it

Marinela Reka said...

Wrapped up sooooooo beautifully :)
Short Poems

william said...

THAT WAS LOVELY, MORE PRECIOUS THAN ANY GIFT, SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL XX

KParthasarathi said...

Very nicely written.The last two verses with their positive approach made me happy.You write extremely well

A said...

THE BEST MOTHERS DAY POEM I HAVE EVER READ...I READ A LOT.

EXCELLENT. I DON'T HAVE WORDS TO DESCRIBE THE DEPTH AND BEAUTY OF THE POEM.

PICTURES COMPLETED THE MEANING.

THANKS FOR WRITING AND SHARING.

A said...

One more thing, when I leave comment, I mean it. I don't write for just being nice to the author.

My earlier comments are honest appreciation without expecting any visit on my blog.

ഗീത said...

That longing for the nearness of Mother !
I understand that.

Once, when I was so down with fever (I was in hostel) I intensely longed for my Amma. As if by telepathy Amma did come !!! And she took me home.

If your Mother happens to read this, sure her eyes will flood with tears ! So intense is the emotion in the lines.

$.RYN.$ said...

cool poem man, are u like literature lover?

എന്‍.ബി.സുരേഷ് said...

എന്റെ സൂര്യന്‍ അണഞ്ഞുപോകുമ്പോല്‍,
എല്ലാ ആള്‍ക്കൂട്ടവും പിരിഞ്ഞു ഏകാന്തനാവുമ്പോള്‍
എന്റ്റെ ഹൃദയ്യം രക്തം വാര്‍ന്നൊഴുകി നിലവിളിക്കുമ്പോള്‍
എന്റെ നെടുവീര്‍പ്പുപോലും എനിക്കു കേള്‍ക്കാന്‍ കഴിയാതെ വരുമ്പോള്‍
ഞാന്‍ കണ്ണീരിനാല്‍ കുതിരുമ്പോള്‍
എന്റെ സ്വപ്നങ്ങള്‍ ചിതറിപ്പൊകുമ്പോള്‍
പിന്നെ ഒരു മരുഭൂമി പുഷ്പിക്കുമ്പോഴും, ജീവിതനദി ഒഴുകുമ്പോഴും അമ്മ , അമ്മയല്ലാതെ മറ്റാരാണ് നമ്മൂടെ ഊര്‍ജ്ജം.

കനവിലും, കണ്ണീരിലും ചിരിയിലും നമ്മളില്‍ ലയിച്ചിരിക്കുന്നത് മറ്റാര്.

ഈ അമ്മദിവസത്തിന് ഇതല്ലാതെ മറ്റെന്താണ് അര്‍ചന!

Jingle said...

very skillfully done,
lovely images.
Happy Mother's Day!

Being Pramoda... said...

hi RD... amazingggg lines and well arranged pics.. i loved the depth n this poem..:)..

truly very emotional..

thanks fr ur consistent encouragement at my blog.. i remember it for longg longg time...

Avocados said...

Just lovely. Love it :)

sreedevi said...

അമ്മ ലോകത്തിലെ പരമമായ സത്യം...ഈശ്വരനു എപ്പോഴും എല്ലായിടത്തും എത്താന്‍ കഴിയാത്തതിനു അമ്മമാരെ സൃഷ്ടിച്ചു എന്നൊരു പഴമൊഴി.....പക്ഷേ അത് വാസ്തവമാണ്.....കൊള്ളാം അമ്മയുടെ നല്ലൊരു ചിത്രം കിട്ടി.....എന്റെ ബ്ലോഗ് വായിച്ചതിനും നന്ദി പരഞു കൊള്ളട്ടെ....എന്റെ മറ്റു കവിതകളും വായിക്കുമെന്നു കരുതുന്നു....താങ്കളുടെ വിലയേറിയ അഭിപ്രായത്തിനായ് കാത്തിരിക്കുന്നു....ദേവി...

Sh@KiR@ CK said...

Hi there...
Ok,,..the STORY is there...
You read the FIRST PART and
the LAST PART...it is RELATED.
see if you can CATCH it?

hugs
shakira

Rumana Rawat said...

The poem is just great. and pictures too. Happy Mother's day to u also:-)

Marja said...

A very touching and beautiful poem.
A real ode to a mother

Watery Tart said...

there was beautiful imagery to your words here--very nice poem!

Jishad Cronic™ said...

Hello friend ,
Really wonderful poem and the pictures too.

Jingle said...

why?
you can enter again, when I post, the dashboard shall show my most updated post...
I did not get yours either, but I do get many other blogs...

well, i post daily,
if you want to know or read, simply click on my name here in your comment section to see what's going on.
thank you for the kind comments and lasting support to my posts.
i appreciate your friendship!

chitra said...

Hello
Loved each and every line you have written.As a mother I feel so great when youngsters like you write and dedicate beautiful lines which express your love and affection to mothers who I feel are next to God.
Have nice day

Chriz said...

apt fotos and words for the occasion

സ്നേഹപൂര്‍വ്വം ശ്യാമ....(snehapoorvam syama) said...

nice dedication for motherhood :)
thanks for comin to my blog n share de experience... ഇനിയും വരിക,,,
പ്രണയത്തിന്‍റെ ഏകാന്തതയ്ക്ക് ഒരു മധുരം ഉണ്ട് , പക്ഷെ ഇവിടെ പ്രണയം എങ്കിലും കൂട്ടിനുണ്ടായിരുന്നെങ്കില്‍ എന്ന് ആഗ്രഹമാ , സങ്കടത്തോടെ..... :)

Jyotsna P kadayaprath said...

Love u amma...

sulagna ™ said...

hii RD..wow looks like you are into your magic of words..soo great to ahve you abck...lovely..no no beautiful poem..loved every meaning of it..

m currently under corporate bondage..shall set my spirit free and come back soon

HaRy!! said...

feel am toooooooooooo far from mom now :(

Vayady said...

"For I know mother dear, that you are near,
So near..., everywhere….forever…….."


I was especially touched by the last two lines. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem with us.

Typist | എഴുത്തുകാരി said...

Very nice. A tribute to all the Ammas. അമ്മക്കു പകരം വയ്ക്കാന്‍ മറ്റൊരാളില്ല, മറ്റൊന്നുമില്ല.

Readers Dais said...

Dear Anu,

No words to express how i feel anu.... reading your comment... those blessed words from your mother....im humbled, u have been always a consistent inspiration motivating me to write, you know anu, i like reading more than writing, and as the place where i am does not give me access to much books, here im in the blogworld, to recieve the caring words from people like you....& i do believe you will be around with more moral support in future...
:))





Hi! Rachna,

Thank you friend for the quick response and for those words here...



Dear Raveena,

Ur words here make me happy raveena, truly said, mothers love never ends.....
I really appreciate the way you write poems at this age, u are defenitely blessed....
looking for more of those wonderful simple words that brings beauty to the readers mind....
:)





Hi! Neha,

Thank u neha, for those kind words, really inspiring, nice to know u loved it, afterall for moher na, u hve to love :)
U do express ur views really well, after all, your profession demands it right?,
maybe u were referring to this shorter version.





Hi! Suhaina,

Thank u suhaina for coming here, and hope ur mother will get a sweet dish too from u after you hugsss :)
Or maybe u will ask ur fav dish from her right?

Readers Dais said...

Hello Joseph Sir,

ur posts & pics always take me home, as those are the plaes very dear to me, fond memories...:)
Thank u for being here and for those nice words here...it inspires..





Hi! Ayu,

Thanks ayu for liking what u read here for the first time, hope il be able to maintain your first impression...



Dear Yarafat,

Freind, wat more can one ask for, when someone offers their tears after reading this....but let the love in this world wipe of the tears, those tears are from a mind thats filled with love and such a mind will always have someont to wipe them off, or someone who will never let u shed more tears...let it be so...
thank you sooo much freind...




Hi! Rohini,

Thank you freind for being here with your encouraging comment,yes rohini, even i felt those pics would add beauty to my words....even if one doesnt find beauty in those words,those pics will defenitely touch ones heart...
nice to know both could touch u.



Hi! Manzoor,

Welcome to readersdais freind, every son or daughter is always the best in mothers view, the love of ur umma for u and ur love towards her, is never limited, thanks for that wonderful compliment u showered, to the son in me.... .

Readers Dais said...

Hi! Vibushan,

Welcome to the world of readersdais, happy to know that my words along with the pics could give you the feel of a poem...
A very special thnks to be my inspiring freind and those words
:)




Hi! Ramji,

Hey! uve written a beautiful story in a totally different style, hats off to u, thank u boss for ur presence here and for those kind words.




Hi! Cri,

I know ur eyes will reach those pics first, uve got a fantastiv foto blog...
Thanks for the comment here...





Dear Anya,

Thank u sooo much for the comment anya, as always u are also everywhere spreading joy & happiness across the blogworld,
Yeah! parents always remain a personal treasure...within our heart,
Yeah! im proud of her anya, as its because of her that i wrote this right?

:)






Hi! Tara,

A gift for mother....
its hard to find...
thanks tara for those kind words of inspiration...
Hope she sees this....afterall its her who made me write this...

Readers Dais said...

Hi! sm,

welcome freind to readersdais, thanks for ur comment , nice to know u loved it...




Hi! Marinela Reka,


Wecome to readersdais freind, ur comment tooo is beautiful :)






Hello Willaim,

Good to know u liked the poem, thanks sir for ur visit here...






Hello KP,

That was a close readed comment, its always good when thingd end well right? :)
so we are all happy....
thank u sir for ur kind words, kindess do touch our heart :)




Hello Mr.A

Dear freind, still waiting for ur name, ur comment really fills my heart with joy freind, a satisfaction one gets for the little effort we do...especially when its from someone who reads, its value gets added, thanks for those honest appreciation, the words u left here defenitely gives the feeling of ur hearts kindness,
i do defenitely apprecaite it, and nice to know u will be around with ur honest feedbacks :))

Readers Dais said...

Dear geetha,

U know ur comment is really special to me :)
The name whose eyes would have flood with tears if she happened to read my post.....
thanks, thanks for sharing and for the wonderful inspiring comment....
Welcome to readersdais... Hope to c u around :)




Hi! RYN,

Hey, nice to know u loved the poem, literature lover? yeah sure i love to read...welcome freind to readers dais and thanks for the comment.





Dear Suresh,

Hey! that was a beautiful attempt freind, loved it, u are doing a gr8 job at ur space, its really informative and truly i get to know about my ignorance when i visit such blogs as yours...
keep up ur good work and thanks for the wonderful commnt.




Hi! Jingle,

Thanks jingle for ur visit and for being my inspiring freind....





Hi! Pramoda,

Im glad to know u found it emotional..
thanks freind for being at my space too without fail
:)

Readers Dais said...

Hi! Avocados,

Welcome freind to readersdais, thanks for ur presence here, nice to know u loved it.. :)




Hi! Devi,

Welcome to readersdais, im happy to see u here & thanks for the nice words that inspire, u know devi, actually i started readin poems after i became a blogger, and im not that much into those kind of modern poems, but i find ur poems simple and defenitely will be back to read those....
Thanks for ur visit :)



Hi! Shakira,

Thanks for ur visit, the comment uve left for my post at ur space is really inspiring thanks freind, for those words and for being my inspiring freind...
:)



Hi! Rumana,

Welcome to readersdais, nice to know u liked my post,
thanks for ur visit... have a nice vacation :)




Hi! Marja,

Freind im glad to see u here with those inspiring words.

Readers Dais said...

@ Watery Tart,

Dear freind, welcome to readersdais,
thanks for ur feedback




Hi! Jishad,

Welcome freind to readersdais, thanks for letting me know u liked the poem.




Hello Chitra,

True chitra mothers are next to god, and one will always remain a child for them however old we grow,
Your words of appreciation do inspire,thanks....



Hi! Chriz,

Its a real surprise to see u at my space, thanks for those words freind...

Readers Dais said...

Hi! Shyama,

U know freind, when we feel we are left alone, thats when we see our dear ones all around, as moon, breeze, a song......everywhere we search for that loving face....still sometimes we may be left alone...sometimes
Welcome to readersdais & thanks for those words here





Dear Joe,

Too busy with ur work eh!, thanks for sparing some time to pen a few words here..
:))





Hi! Sulagna,

Was wondering where u had left? anyway nice to know u loved my words, hmmmm!... magic of words, the magic spell from god :)
Hope to cu back soon with a post after ur spirit is let free from those corporate clutches :)




Hi! Harry,

Hey! never can we go tooooo far from our mom freind, she is always there near for you, the problem is we never feel enough of that love :)
Thanks freind for ur visit.



Hi! Vayady,

I think caling u thathamma is more apt :)
Thanks freind for ur visit, nice to know it could touch ur heart & a special thanks for being my inspiring freind....
:)

ഒഴാക്കന്‍. said...

oh dear.... super dear!

Vayady said...

Hi Nirmal,

You're more than welcome. Many people prefer 'thathamma' as well. Therefore feel free to call me 'thathamma'in the future. Looking forward to more poems.

thathamma-:)

Chandrika Shubham said...

Very touching indeed! :)

Jingle said...

Hope that you enjoy a beautiful Sunday!
thanks for the encouraging comments in my blog!

perooran said...

nice

wise donkey said...

lovely. too lovely...

R. Ramesh said...

wise donkey said wisely: this is a lovely post. thanks buddy 4 yr encouragement:)

എറക്കാടൻ / Erakkadan said...

:)

R. Ramesh said...

nanni chetta..:) nanri thalaiva:)

Mingled Minds said...

in one word AWSOME...it just reminds me how much i missed my mom while i was away from home..marvellous :D :D

Gauri Mathur said...

Beautiful!

R. Ramesh said...

hahha anne anne..namba vooru ippo rombo kettu pochanne...hehee

Pravin Nair said...

Hi there....

was a very beautiful poem..a nice dedication...

keep writing!

sm said...

very nice poem

ഉപാസന || Upasana said...

അമ്മയെപ്പറ്റി എത്രയെഴുതിയാലാണ് മതിയാവുക
നൈസ്
:-)

sulagna ™ said...

heyii Rd thank you so much for the ebautiful comment on my post...G truly feels awesome when he reads such comments :)

R. Ramesh said...

buddy thanks ya:)

A said...

I read it many times and enjoyed every time. You seem to beleive in quality. Once a week or so but thougtful ones.

വരയും വരിയും : സിബു നൂറനാട് said...

"let me nap,on your lap, feeling your soft stroking fingers"

The one I always love...

Thanks for the pleasant poem :-)

Aadhila said...

What a lovely touching lines...words are not enough to express the true feeling...I love to share you some links of mine as well....
http://aadhillasdiary.blogspot.com/2010/03/blog-post_26.html

http://aadhillasdiary.blogspot.com/2009/11/because-you-are-my-mother.html

http://aadhillasdiary.blogspot.com/2009/08/blog-post_2023.html

DuDo said...

Hi, i had been recommended by anu to your blog. I was really spellbound to read your poems. loved the thought flow!!!!!

Would love to come back and read again!!!

Regards

DuDo

R. Ramesh said...

boss. the concept of news is dead in the sense that earlier news used to trickle thru reporters..now within seconds of something happening the entire world can c visuals...the communication world has changed in a decade..print media will survive of course..but i dunno how and in what form..cheers

william said...

a small token :)

http://s5.tinypic.com/351ei46_th.jpg

Jingle said...

I wish you post more often,
Thank you for the encouraging comments.

Happy Monday!

jayarajmurukkumpuzha said...

very nice............ bestwishes............

ramanika said...

your post reminded me the good days(my childhood) i had with my mother
still i wish i could see my mother in the moon, star, rain, sunshine and anything and everything
but definitely your post drew back to the best days and i am thankful

Jingle said...

http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/05/jingles-may-follower-award-week-4.html

awards 4 u,
Happy May 26.

jyo said...

lovely-i liked it sooo much-

congrats

ഹംസ said...

nice

Rebecca said...

Very beautiful, very tender.

Neena Sharma said...

I visited your blog for the first time. Liked the poem, touching!

ആയിരത്തിയൊന്നാംരാവ് said...

I am very poor in english yet I can understand the word desert blooming.....

Pavitra .... said...

Oh wow....this a so lovely....You are really very talented...
Keep writing more..!! I'll be back!!

PurpleHeart said...

Dear Unni, I have said this before but every time I read your poem, I have this intense urge to somehow convince you to compile all your writing and put them all in print !!!! I understand from one of your replies here that you started reading poetry only after you got into blogging. Do not let this skill you have go unrecognized. Please, let it all break free and do write more.

What a WONDERFUL one this was !!! I hope, pray and always will wish that your mother's love and blessings stay with you as the heart of your life and that you go places - the best places of LIFE !! God bless !!

Bikramjit said...

Wow a beatuful poem, dont know what i can say which has not been mentioned in the previous comments but so many people...

I guess they have said it all I am speechless .. VERY WELL DONE and I am glad I came here to read this via "A"'s blog... and he has rightly given the award to ur article .. Very goood ...

ബിലാത്തിപട്ടണം / BILATTHIPATTANAM. said...

Mom ...She is alwayas ..with you...




As I see my life stream flowing,

Brave I swim, with a mind never failing,

For I know mother dear, that you are near,

So near..., everywhere….forever……..