In eyes I see….
Mystifying depths of sea,
Hiding minds pain that boil,
Like un treasured sea soil.
Mystifying depths of sea,
Hiding minds pain that boil,
Like un treasured sea soil.
In eyes I see…Shining stars of sky,
Sparkling love longing to fly,
Like night wait, to see them high.
In eyes I see…
Graceful buds that bow,
Blushing red that flow,
Like girl’s first kiss that glow.
In eyes I see…
Erupting lava that linger,
The spreading heat of anger,
Like a wild lions hunger.
In eyes I see…
Rising forest fires,
The lovely lust as flames,
Like embraced dance of snakes,
In eyes I see…
Darkened clouds floating,
The mourning moments waiting
Like a deserts dream on raining.
In eyes I see…
So silent & calm- a lake,
Taking pains, on others sake,
Like an ocean receiving brooks.
In eyes I see…
The world in you,
My world is you,
& You
Your EYES….
74 comments:
Dear Unni,
Good Evening!
The wait was worth.:)A beautiful poem full of love!
Wow!I'm the first one to comment!:)
In eyes I see,
The bright glow of love,
The love that's deep and true,
The untold words of soft nothings,
The touching lines of a melody.
In eyes I see,
The thousand things he has to share,
The small and silly daily happenings,
The cheer and laughter,
The spreading fragrance of jasmine!
Unni,you are lucky to own the eyes,where your world exists!
By the way,tell me yaar without any rains,will the love bud bloom so beautifully in the desert?
And I must say-the pictures of eyes are amazing!wonderful!I simply loved them.
Congratulations!
Wishing you a beautiful holiday,to think up on the next post!
Sasneham,
Anu
Hey RD.. welcome back.. reading u after soo long, and the post is worth the wait..:)
very veryy good observations and the pics were extreamly suitable..;)
eyes say the maximum abt a person's emotions, its up to one to protect the same..:)
thanks for the post and for the pics toooo..:)
made me remember a line form Donne's poem
"my face in thine eyes and thine in mine appear" John Donne
well written
‘ഇന്ദ്രനീലിമയോലും ഈമിഴിപൊയ്കകളില്‍
ഇന്നലെ നിന്മുഖം നീ നോക്കി നിന്നു...”
മറ്റൊരാളുടെ കണ്ണില്‍ സ്വന്തം മുഖം കാണുന്നവന്‍ സ്വര്‍ഗം കാണുന്നു എന്നു വയ്പ്പ്...
കലക്കന്‍ കവിത ഉണ്ണീ.....
Hi readersdais
Nice to see you back
after a long break ;)
"Our eyes
are the mirror of our soul"
Wonderful post about eyes !!!!!
(great choice from eye photo's)
:-)
to see all these in the EYES one should have vision & imagination
you have both
very nice is your EYES.
Back here after a break
pretty nice one.
wonderful come back :)
Dear Unni..
How beautifully you are able to read volumes and volumes of lyrics in those deep eyes!so nicely conveyd..
love and wishes
joe
Brilliant, I should say
Beautiful lines. very well expressed.
excellent is not the word for this piece..very beautiful :)
കണ്ണുകളുടെ മാസ്മരികതയും
തിളങ്ങുന്ന കണ്ണുകളിലെ തുറന്ന കാണലുകളും
വളരെ ചടുലമായി തന്നെ ഭംഗിയോടെ
മനോഹരമായി വരികളില്‍ ചാര്‍ത്തിയിരിക്കുന്നു.
വരികള്‍ക്കനുസൃതമായി കണ്ണുകളെ
കാണിച്ച കാഴ്ച അതിമനോഹരം.
നന്നായി ഇഷ്ടായി.
Eyes are a reflection of your mind, there are so many things that eyes can say but our mouth refuses to utter.
Thats a beautiful post :)
beautiful/////following u
Dear Anu,
That was a beautigful comment from u, ha ur words on eyes too are beautiful ...poetic emotional flow eh?
as u said a bud to bloom without rains is a tough situation, but in desert we can never expect rains, still the desert plants too have to survive...right?
Thanks for ur inspirational words for my post... :)
Dear Pramoda,
Hey! Thanks for ur comment, and if u feel its worth the wait, im humbled by ur sweeet words.
Thanks a lot :)
Dear Anoop,
Thanks for the visit and ur quote as a comment, i like ur style of using words
Dear Manu,
That was an honour, ur visit to my space itself takes me to heights, so leaving a comment from a writer like you is a real inspiration..thanks :)
Dear Anya,
I was on a vacation away from the blogworld,thanks for this warm welcome.. :)
Dear Ramanika,
Hey! that was a real cool comment, u really gave eyes to ur comments too... thanks
Hi! Sorcy,
Thanks Dude, for ur comment and u r really rocking out there in ur space...coool
Dear Joe,
Thanks for those kind an inspirational words joe, as ur posts convey u do spread strength and inspiration,
Thanks... :)
Dear Partha,
Thanks a bunch for ur comment...
I do wonder abt the pace at which u write...gr8 going.
Hello Chithra,
Welcome to readersdais,
thanks for ur visit and comment...
nice to know ive been able express well... :)
Hi! Neha,
Hmmm A superlative comment eh! Thanks a bunch :)
Hello Ramji,
Welcome to readersdais,
Thanks ramji for ur valuable visit and poetic comment.
Special thanks for having u in my readers box.
Hi! Sana,
Welcome to readersdais,thanks for ur visit and comment,looking more for ur dreams and thoughts. :)
Hi! Rohini,
Welcome to readersdais,thanks for coming here and writing a comment...
Special thanks for adding to my readers list..thanks :)
ഭാവന കരകവിയുന്നു.... നന്നായിരിക്കുന്നു.. കഥ പറയുന്ന ചിത്രങ്ങള്‍....
കഥ പറയുന്ന കണ്ണുകള്‍ നന്നായി
am sure the value of eyes cant b better explained!..cyu around... nice blog yu have
Beautiful poem Yes the eyes reveal everything Thanks for visiting me
hello കാണാമറയത്ത് ,
Thank you for ur visit and ur inspiring comment,
follower box - il കാണാമറയത്ത് അല്ലാത്തതിനും വളരെ നന്ദി
Hi! MTW^2,
Thanks for ur visit and ur lovely comment..
Hi! Harry,
It was so nice of you to put such a comment..thanks for ur visit and those words..it inspires... :)
Hi! Marja,
Thanks for u visit & comment...hope to cyu around...
this is just so awesomely done! i really really appreciate this! :)
Hi RD first time on your blog but i definitely liked the writing..the poem on someones eyes is so true and heart felt..beautiful attempt
ഹലോ,എഴുതുയത് നന്നായിട്ടുണ്ട്.
ഫോളോ ചെയ്യുന്നതില്‍ എന്തെങ്കിലും എറര്‍ വന്നതായിരിക്കും. അതൊന്നു ഡിലേറ്റ് ചെയ്തിട്ട് വീണ്ടും ഫോളോ ചെയ്തു നോക്കു. പ്രശ്നമെന്നു മനസ്സിലാകുന്നില്ല.
കണ്ണുകളില്‍ ഞാനും കാണുന്നു , സങ്കടങ്ങളുടെ ആഴക്കടലിനെ ......... കണ്ണില്ലാതവരിലും കാണുന്നു സങ്കടങ്ങളുടെ മഹാസമുദ്രം തിര അടിക്കുന്നത് .
those beautiful eyes make me think of amazing creativity of god....
good work by you of course by collecting them on single page........
loved your post...
this time on my blog an English poem..
do visit and comment...
Lovely...
:)
Lovely post.
Did ur comments in my blog.
Thank you :)
mere blog par is baar..
वो लम्हें जो शायद हमें याद न हों......
jaroor aayein...
Hi! Divya,
Welcome to readersdais,urs was a real nice inspiring comment, again,thanks for ur visit :)
Hi! Sulagna,
Welcome to RD,Thanks for dropping by and for the words here...
Hi! Rosapookkal,
Welcome to readersdais & thanks for ur comment, following il try again, there was some problem earlier lemme try.. :)
പ്രിയപ്പെട്ട സാധിക് ,
എന്റെ ബ്ലോഗിലേക്ക് സ്വാഗതം , ഇവിടെ കുറിച്ച ആ നല്ല വാക്കുകള്ക് നന്ദി
Hi! Shekar,
Welcome to readers dais,
hmm u write poems in rocket speed eh!
thanks for ur visit & comments..
Hi! Shades,
Welcome to readersdais,thanks for being a shade as comments here... :)
ഹലോ മുല്ലപ്പൂ,
എന്നെ ബ്ലോഗിങ്ങിലേക്ക് കൊണ്ട് വന്ന ബ്ലോഗ്ഗേറെ......
കുറെയേറെ നാളായല്ലോ കണ്ടിട്ട്,
താങ്കളുടെ ബ്ലോഗിലേക്ക് പ്രവേശനം നിഷേധിച്ചിരിക്കുകയാനല്ലോ,
no probs...its ur wish, I was iniitailly inspired to be a blogger reading ur blogs,
wanted to let u know...
എന്റെ ആദ്യത്തെ കമന്റ്‌ അവിടതെയാണ് ....നന്ദി
പ്രചോദനത്തിനു .... :)
Good one :)
Hi! Quest,
Welcome to readersdais lol
thanks for ur visit & comment.
hey RD its been long since you posted somethin..we are all waiting
Hey that was a beautiful poem. By the way, my name is Nethra and whenever I read about eyes, I can't stop a smile.
Thanks for the beautiful read. :)
Hi! Sulagna,
That was a warm and inspiring comment from you... :))))
wat else does one need to be inspired, thank u...
so much.
Hi! Nethra,
Hey!is it becoming tough for u to hide ur emotions that reflect thru ur eyes?
just joking eh! as ur name is nethra.., nice name, not so common, if i had a friend in this name, i my not have written this :)
btw..welcome to readersdais and thanks for ur comment...
heyy thts a beautiful poem!
i got to see a different world through your eyes :)
pls keep writing beautifully :)
I also write poems.u cld pay me a visit at my page:
www.assorted-platter.blogspot.com
Ur opinion wld be invaluable.Thanks!
Hi Unni
I have never heard of pet owners day ????
Sounds funny :-)
I have only one cat "Kareltje"
and koi fish in our pond in the garden :))))) hahaha.......
Thanks for your nice comments always !!
greetings Anya :)
(where is your new post ????)
Keep blogging :-)
valare manoharam..... aashamsakal...........
"In eyes I see…
So silent & calm- a lake,
Taking pains, on others sake,
Like an ocean receiving brooks."
ഈ വരികളോടാണ്‌ കൂടുതല്‍ അടുപ്പം തോന്നിയത്!
thank you for following,
lovely versions of eyes.
http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/04/sunshine-brightens-ones-day-award-and.html
Happy Saturday!
Hello Greetings:)
Amazing poem on eyes.This beautifully written poem with lovely photos opened my own eyes. It is absolutely true that eyes reveal everything about a person-the moods,desires,feelings etc.
Best wishes:)
Joseph
what a beautiful post friend, thanks for visiting my blog and your kind comment, it is always nice to meet new friends :)
WONDERFUL POST!
thank you for telling you could not post comments..it is fixed now..
hugs
shakira
A very beautiful composition. Thanks.
My first visit here. And, what a beautifully poetic post. So true as well.
Very interesting book, your works are very beautiful !
Thanks for your visit and comment
Cri
It was lovely to recieve your comment, Thank you for coming by,
I read your latest post and I thinkf it is beautiful.
Take care and thank you.
Yvonne.
കണ്ണുകള്‍ കഥ പറയാറുണ്ട്....!
Eyes are the windows to the soul, they say.
:-)
Thanks for your lovely orange comment :))))))))))))
(@^.^@)
Beautiful Eyes mentioning different thoughts !!Great post !!
Absolutely stunning. Very nice pictures. I will start following you.
Do you have a set of 'eyes' which shows 'thinking' that I can use as logo of my blog?
Hi! Pravin,
Welcome to readers dais.
Thanks friend for your visit and the inspiring comment.
Hi! Jayaraj,
welcome to my blog, thanks for those words..
Hi! Vayady,
uve got a good blog name i should say,
Welcomr to readersdais,there are people who hide emotions in heart and portray a peaceful eyes that reflects calm & peace,but all for the sake of others, i hope u cud relate well to those words....
thanks for u visit & comment friend.
Hi! Jingle,
ur name itself brings merry, welcome here to readersdais my friend, appreciate ur visit & comments.
Hello Joseph Sir,
Welcome to readersdais, u wont know how happy i was seeing the photos of my hometown in ur blog...
Thank u sir, for ur visit & valuable comment.
Hello Mr.William,
I wonder how u come up with such beautiful themes on a daily basis, Hats off to you sir, welcome to my small blog-readersdais,
ur comments are valued.
Hi! Shakira,
Welcome to readersdais,thanks for ur visit & comment,its an inspiration..
Hello Subramaniam Sir,
Welcome to readersdais,sir thanks is from my side for ur valuable presence & comment here...thanks :)
Hello Rachana,
Nice to know that ur first visit to readersdais gave u something that u liked, thanks for passing by and for the wonderful comment.
Hello cri,
Welcome to readersdais friend, and a special thanks for being a follower, its defenitely an inspiration, thanks for ur visit & beautiful comment. :)
Hello Yvonne,
Welcome to readersdais,nice to know u think its a beautiful post,thank u for coming & commenting. :)
Hi! Raveena,
welcome friend-to readersdais, thanks for ur visit and comment here, ur blog space have some wonderful thoughts.
Hi! Raji,
Welcome friend, to readersdais,thanks for passing by and leaving a comment, it inspires. :)
Dear Anya,
So nice of you to thank me dear...
uve got a lively blog...full of energy :)
Hello Unseen Rajasthan,
Thanks friend for making the unseen rajasthan visible to the world, u r doing a gr8 job there, thans friend for ur visit & for the few words commented, they defenitely inspire...
Hi! A
the first alphabet u are, so let u be the best.. :)
welcome to readersdais friend, thanks for that inspiring comment ...
Hey, but i dont see u in my follower box....
This is to all the above friends who have spared time to pen a few words here, after reading this post, the warm words which u all have showered for my post have filled my heart with gratitude to each and everyone here, and i do believe its a real great support that u all have shown through your marvellous words..........
thank you friends......
I am following you now. I came home and showed these 'eyes' to my wife and daughter. Beautiful once again.
very interesting.
RD look 57 comments!!!! omg!!! now that means we need a new post :)
Hi Unniji, I am delighted to be on an Indian blog. Popularity of your blog is visible in the comments section. As a part of blogging activity I visit so many blogs randomly but rarely visited a blog which receives 57 comments for a single posting. Thanks for visit to my blog with encouraging words. Keep in touch.
"In eyes I see…
The world in you..."
Yes..through the eyes we can see the whole life itself..
Best wishes!! keep on blogging!!
Really beautiful :) glad following u!
Short Poems
Hi! A,
Aha, u really touched my heart, friend, to know that someone far away,has something i wrote in his thoughts....wat else do one need friend....thanks thank u sooooo much.
for adding urself in my inspiring friends list.
Hi! Suhaina,
Welcome to readersdais,
thanks for ur visit and comment,special thanks for being one of my inspiring friends.
Hi! Sulagna,
soooooo sweeeeeeeeet , sulagna,
thats really inspiring, who wont get inspired with such a comment.
Hey! ive already done with the new post,but as its a dedication im waiting for the day....not much far anyway...
thank u sooooooo much :)
Hi! Kamathji,
Welcome sir, to readersdais,
thank you for ur valuable visit here and comment,actually this is the first time im getting this much comments, im also surprised :)
thanks for being one of my inspiring friends..
Hi! Joy,
welcome friend to my blog,
uve got a real humourous style of writing..
thanku for dropping your comment here.
Hi! Marinela reka,
Welcome friend to readersdais, i just visited ur site, its amazing that u started writing at the age of six, couldnt read much...thanks for coming to my blog and leaving ur comments,
special thanks for adding urself to my inspiring friends.
Great to meet you greet you and read you here
:)
Amazing! :)
I went to leave you a greeting and thank you for your visit. You are very kind !
Cri
brilliant post ya..enjoyed reading..cheers n wishes:)
Eyes speak what words can't...
Excellent!
ഈ കണ്ണുകള്‍ കാണുമ്പോഴെങ്കിലും 'കണ്ണാടി ' എന്ന ബ്ലോഗിനെ ഓര്‍ത്തൂടെ മാഷെ...?
Hi! Sapna,
Welcome & thanks for ur visit..:)
Ozhakkanji,
Welcome to readers dais, a smile speaks volumes...isnt it? thank u...
Chandrika....
Welcome to readersdais, uve got a wonderful blog, thanks for ur comment here.
Hi! Ayu,
welcome here, and thanks for being an inspiring friend...
Hi! Cristina,
That was so nice of u to acknowledge, ur snaps are so beautiful...are u a photographer by profession?
Hi! Rameshji,
as u say, and u do...keep smiling, ha! that was my school motto and i do follow that.. :)
Welcome to readersdais freind & thanks for those nice words...
Hi! Friend V..
I feel bad to call u by ur blog name :)
Thnks freind for ur visit and comment..
Hi Raveena,
What a question dear, i need not see these eyes to remember you and your blog, as i said u are a blessed child, and i do love reading your poems, you have not put following option in that blog, thats y i never know abt ur posts...anyways...keep writing :)
the fabrics r utterly beautyful.
very nice. congrates.
നിന്‍റെ മിഴികളുടെ അഗാധതയില്‍ ഒഴുകുമ്പോള്‍, ഞാന്‍ ചുറ്റുമുള്ള ലോകത്തെ മറന്നു പോകുന്നു.
In my kids eyes, I see sunshine,
full of love and free of pain.. :)
This is really a beautiful one. Love it very much. Hope you write more inspiring poetry soon.
Love, edlin
We read it again and it is beautiful.
Beautiful poem.Loved every word
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