Struggling to stand
For the sand so sober
Stood the plant
Lone in the desert
Heated by incidents
Of lone pain dents
causing roots to thicken
To survive all stunts
Stood the plant drooping
Searching for some soothing
A soft soothe of a drop
The slop drop of Love
Seasons change
Reasons change
Wait alone stays
For a drop in range
Quenching for a drop
Searched the plant – a drench
For a feel of moist
To its roots the most
Ends the long wait to rain
That no heat can drain..
A cool breeze to sway
Clouds gather to stay
The best drop to say
Taste my love your way
A drop on the leaf
Healing the heat of grief
The love drop of care
Pouring deep root to share
Blooming the plant
Grooming bud glands
The desert has showered
The plant has towered
The bud has flowered
A life is honoured
Filled with a grace
Swaying a dance
In tune with breeze
In rhythm to humming bees
Drizzle drops that pour
Soaking love to core
Sizzling care that gore
The plant, to every pore
A bless of life
Like hands that hold
A place with peace
Its
Replanted to a nest.....
25 comments:
Dear Unni,
HAPPY ONAM!
an awesome post on true love,
the longing of a deserted flower,
the cheer the raindrops bring to it,
the changes in the growth of the plant,
unni,you've described the ecstasy,
of the blooming bud,
and the feelings are conveyed beautifully.
do write often;you're so gifted
and this is the most beautiful onam gift,
you can offer to your readers!:)
''the bud has flowered,
a life is honoured''.beautiful lines n so touching.
wishing the marvellous moments of ONAM,
sasneham,
anu
Oh! It is really awesome.... I can feel it....
Dear anu,
thank u very much for ur wonderful comment,it makes one happy when the right feelings are conveyed and understood,the real gift are these comments and definitely one gets honoured with such comments :).
Dear Siva,
Its nice to know that u could feel my flower budding as that realisation itself reaps fruit.
I was thrilled when I read the beautiful poem.You write so well.Why don't you fill the pages of your blog with your emotional outpourings? Thanks a bunch
Kp,
ur comment is a real inspiration for me to move forward,the outpour of ur appreciation itself makes me feel like filling my blog as u said,hope il be able to do so..thanks for ur visit & comment.
I hope and sincerely wish you experience the best of love in life since you seem to understand it completely and perfectly. Really enjoyed it. Happy belated Onam to you, Unni. :)
Hey Purple Heart!
That was a real recognition for me yaar,if u feel i understand it perfectly then there should be experience into it na,Nice to see u back after a long time and hope u had a wonderful onam :).
@ Purple heart,
& Thanx :)
That its a wonderful attempt,
Is the least to say...
You sure did strike a chord or two,
In the remotest corners of the heart,
Where only true love finds its way...
What more can I say... Awesome!
Regards,
Arin
"Struggling to stand
For the sand so sober
Stood the plant
Lone in the desert"...
if the sand is sober no need to struggle..let's see things soberly...........:)
hi ..
Very good poem..Thanks for this ..:)
Thank you for visiting my blog and would like to see u thr again and again..:)
Seasons change
Reasons change
but you should not change your style of writing
its marvellous !
wonderful.. these words speak loud indeed
were are ur new posts?
Hi! Arindam !
Ur visit is a pleasure indeed,The quality of ur posts is very much evident in these comments too,rightly said only true love finds way to the remotest corners of ones heart...thanks for coming and for ur beautiful comment.
Dear Joe,
It gives me real inspiration to know that someone like you does have interest in my blog.Ur visits and comments definitely makes a difference..thanks joe. :)
Hi! Pramoda,
Thanks for ur comment & for your visit too,welcome to my blog.And abt visiting ur blog ,who can deny such an invitation :)
Moreover ur thoughts are interesting.
Dear Ramaniga,
Thank u very much for ur comment,I dont know whether i have a style of writing,anyway it was very nice of u to let me think in those aspects too..
Hey Chriz !
Chronic writer! telling my words speak aloud,wow! it makes me feel great that u loved my words.. and thank u for coming and commenting...Would like to cu here again
Get your site listed at www.a-p-e-x.org which has over 12,000 categories.
Hi
Its a very touching poem,
its so lovely and beautiful :)
It makes my day .....
(Thank you for sending cat pictures to Anu, she send it all to me, I am very happy,
Its so nice to have friends so far away !! THANKS AGAIN :)
(@^.^@)
Anya :)
Kareltje =^.^=
Really good writing.. very well expressed...
Filled with a grace
Swaying a dance
In tune with breeze
In rhythm to humming bees
Its almost musical...
Make website india
Beautiful!
wow!!
those beautiful lines on love..amazin you are
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